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Friday, November 1, 2013

The Haunted Basement


THE HAUNTED BASEMENT!

Niki was existed because her mum and she had just moved into their new house. Niki's mum asked her if she wants the upstairs bedroom or the basement as her room. Niki chose the basement for her bedroom because it was big enough for her things. So all day she was unpacking. That dark stormy night Niki was sitting on her old bed in her new bedroom when she spots, her wardrobe door knob twist and the door opens but no one was there. She got under her covers her heart was pounding more than when she finished the weet bix triathlon. After that she heard thumping and creaking from the old wooden stairs... But she was tired so she fell asleep. In the morning she didn’t hear creaking from the stairs nor did she see the door knob twist. But she was still scared, she felt really uncomfortable in her bedroom. Niki wished her and her mum stayed at their old house. When her mum calls out “Niki time to have breakfast” she goes upstairs. Niki told her mum about her bedroom. Niki’s mum tells her don’t go in your room for a while. Niki sits at the table thoughts kept running through her head, about the thing in her room maybe it was a ghost but she doesn’t know...

2 comments:

  1. To sarah m
    Your story was amazing i loved it!
    I liked how you used adjectives and made it mysterious.
    what was your favourite part of writing this story?
    from sarah r

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